Vad får vi veta?
We get to know that the story is about two sisters, the older who's evil, and the other with a good heart. The older sister burns her little sister to make her look ugly. Then they both tries to see ”The Hidden One”, to marry him, but only the little sister can do it.
Vad är bra?
The good thing is that the older sister, who is evil, don’t get to marry ”The Hidden One”, and even though the little sister with the good heart has a lot of scars on her body, she has a good soul and can therefore marry him.
Vad är dåligt?
The bad thing is that the older sister is so awful to her little sister, and that their father doesn't understand that it's the older sister who is burning her.
Känslor?
At the beginning, it was a little bit exciting but also sad when they were telling what happenend to the little sister. But then it got happier and happier when the story went on, and when the little sister got to marry ”The Hidden One” it was very good.
Hur kan man göra på något annat sätt?
I think it was a little bit too much that she burned her face and body. You could changed it to maybe something a little bit softer.
Very good questions but write them in English!
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